a research about Personal Statements


ayeletoz

Hi,
I am a student in Tel Aviv University (Israel) Faculty of Humanities (and soon a LLM student in the US. I was lately admitted to Yale).

In my current studies, I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis. In the paper I wish to analize the way people introduce themselves and consrtuct their "self" to graduate law school through their Personal Statements.

And that is why I need you help: I am trying to collect as many PSs as possible.
So I ask of you if you could please send me your own PS for my research.

and I emphasis:
* your PS will not be used for any other purpose besides writing my paper. [as I mentioned, I already got in, so I don't need to copy it or something of the sort]
* I will not distribute or pass your PS to anybody else.
* I will not mention your name in the paper.

If you are wiiling to help me, please send the PS to ozayelet@gmail.com
and indicate to which university it was sent.

Thank you so very much!
Ayelet

Hi,
I am a student in Tel Aviv University (Israel) Faculty of Humanities (and soon a LLM student in the US. I was lately admitted to Yale).

In my current studies, I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis. In the paper I wish to analize the way people introduce themselves and consrtuct their "self" to graduate law school through their Personal Statements.

And that is why I need you help: I am trying to collect as many PSs as possible.
So I ask of you if you could please send me your own PS for my research.

and I emphasis:
* your PS will not be used for any other purpose besides writing my paper. [as I mentioned, I already got in, so I don't need to copy it or something of the sort]
* I will not distribute or pass your PS to anybody else.
* I will not mention your name in the paper.

If you are wiiling to help me, please send the PS to ozayelet@gmail.com
and indicate to which university it was sent.

Thank you so very much!
Ayelet
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badkarma56

Hi,
I am a student in Tel Aviv University (Israel) Faculty of Humanities (and soon a LLM student in the US. I was lately admitted to Yale).

In my current studies, I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis. In the paper I wish to analize the way people introduce themselves and consrtuct their "self" to graduate law school through their Personal Statements.

And that is why I need you help: I am trying to collect as many PSs as possible.
So I ask of you if you could please send me your own PS for my research.

and I emphasis:
* your PS will not be used for any other purpose besides writing my paper. [as I mentioned, I already got in, so I don't need to copy it or something of the sort]
* I will not distribute or pass your PS to anybody else.
* I will not mention your name in the paper.

If you are wiiling to help me, please send the PS to ozayelet@gmail.com
and indicate to which university it was sent.

Thank you so very much!
Ayelet


No offense, Ayelet, but I suspect that your efforts to solicit personal statements here will prove to be fruitless.

Applicants (myself included) are justifiably wary of scams involving the unethical distribution/sale of others' personal statements...

<blockquote>Hi,
I am a student in Tel Aviv University (Israel) Faculty of Humanities (and soon a LLM student in the US. I was lately admitted to Yale).

In my current studies, I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis. In the paper I wish to analize the way people introduce themselves and consrtuct their "self" to graduate law school through their Personal Statements.

And that is why I need you help: I am trying to collect as many PSs as possible.
So I ask of you if you could please send me your own PS for my research.

and I emphasis:
* your PS will not be used for any other purpose besides writing my paper. [as I mentioned, I already got in, so I don't need to copy it or something of the sort]
* I will not distribute or pass your PS to anybody else.
* I will not mention your name in the paper.

If you are wiiling to help me, please send the PS to ozayelet@gmail.com
and indicate to which university it was sent.

Thank you so very much!
Ayelet
</blockquote>

No offense, Ayelet, but I suspect that your efforts to solicit personal statements here will prove to be fruitless.

Applicants (myself included) are justifiably wary of scams involving the unethical distribution/sale of others' personal statements...
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ayeletoz

all I can say is that It isn't the case, and that i'm honest.

I have nothing else to say, I guess.

all I can say is that It isn't the case, and that i'm honest.

I have nothing else to say, I guess.
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dynamo

all I can say is that It isn't the case, and that i'm honest.

I have nothing else to say, I guess.


come on ayelet, give us a break, couldn't you come up with a more sucked up excuse as "I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis"....

I doubt any clever soul would believe that crap. write your own PS.

<blockquote>all I can say is that It isn't the case, and that i'm honest.

I have nothing else to say, I guess.
</blockquote>

come on ayelet, give us a break, couldn't you come up with a more sucked up excuse as "I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis"....

I doubt any clever soul would believe that crap. write your own PS.
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ayeletoz

well, I can see no help would come from here. I am sorry for stepping on everybody's toes. I didn't realise how sensitive the subject is. sorry. [although there was really no need to use such offensive language].

you can all think whatever you want. I have said what I had to say, thanks for nothing.

well, I can see no help would come from here. I am sorry for stepping on everybody's toes. I didn't realise how sensitive the subject is. sorry. [although there was really no need to use such offensive language].

you can all think whatever you want. I have said what I had to say, thanks for nothing.
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badkarma56

come on ayelet, give us a break, couldn't you come up with a more sucked up excuse as "I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis"....

I doubt any clever soul would believe that crap. write your own PS.


Indeed, Dynamo. I sense that "the force" is very strong with you, young padawan...

Apologies Ayelet, if you're in fact "on the level." Alas, no conscientious applicant will likely share their personal statement with a complete stranger on a message board.

<blockquote>come on ayelet, give us a break, couldn't you come up with a more sucked up excuse as "I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis"....

I doubt any clever soul would believe that crap. write your own PS.</blockquote>

Indeed, Dynamo. I sense that "the force" is very strong with you, young padawan...

Apologies Ayelet, if you're in fact "on the level." Alas, no conscientious applicant will likely share their personal statement with a complete stranger on a message board.
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AlexeyRU

Don't be so rude dynamo.
Indeed, we could never know of his real intentions.

Anyway, Ayelet, I suppose you hardly could get any response here. PS is obviously a result of a very tense work and... not to share.

Anyway, I personally wish you luck with this.

Don't be so rude dynamo.
Indeed, we could never know of his real intentions.

Anyway, Ayelet, I suppose you hardly could get any response here. PS is obviously a result of a very tense work and... not to share.

Anyway, I personally wish you luck with this.
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dynamo

come on ayelet, give us a break, couldn't you come up with a more sucked up excuse as "I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis"....

I doubt any clever soul would believe that crap. write your own PS.


Indeed, Dynamo. I sense that "the force" is very strong with you, young padawan...

Apologies Ayelet, if you're in fact "on the level." Alas, no conscientious applicant will likely share their personal statement with a complete stranger on a message board.


the force is strong with this one indeed -- all I can say that I have been burnt before, and I'd hate to see the same happen to others....

it was ment as a word of advise....that's all.

<blockquote><blockquote>come on ayelet, give us a break, couldn't you come up with a more sucked up excuse as "I am writing a paper for a seminar about discourse analysis"....

I doubt any clever soul would believe that crap. write your own PS.</blockquote>

Indeed, Dynamo. I sense that "the force" is very strong with you, young padawan...

Apologies Ayelet, if you're in fact "on the level." Alas, no conscientious applicant will likely share their personal statement with a complete stranger on a message board.</blockquote>

the force is strong with this one indeed -- all I can say that I have been burnt before, and I'd hate to see the same happen to others....

it was ment as a word of advise....that's all.
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badkarma56

[W]e could never know of his real intentions.

Anyway, Ayelet, I suppose you hardly could get any response here. PS is obviously a result of a very tense work and... not to share.

Anyway, I personally wish you luck with this.


I believe "Ayelet" is actually a feminine name (Isreali)...in any event, Alexei, I'm sure "he" or "she" appreciates your endorsement and good faith. :)

<blockquote>[W]e could never know of his real intentions.

Anyway, Ayelet, I suppose you hardly could get any response here. PS is obviously a result of a very tense work and... not to share.

Anyway, I personally wish you luck with this.
</blockquote>

I believe "Ayelet" is actually a feminine name (Isreali)...in any event, Alexei, I'm sure "he" or "she" appreciates your endorsement and good faith. :)
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AlexeyRU

Don't be so rude dynamo.
Indeed, we could never know of his real intentions.

Anyway, Ayelet, I suppose you hardly could get any response here. PS is obviously a result of a very tense work and... not to share.

Anyway, I personally wish you luck with this.


I believe "Ayelet" is actually a feminine name (Isreali)...in any event, Alexei, I'm sure "he" or "she" appreciates your endorsement and good faith. :)


Thanks,
Indeed, I suppose that such research, if well made, could be very positive. Such monography could be very much of pcychology, but not of "how to get to dream school, using other's ideas"
But the approach is still incorrect...

<blockquote><blockquote>Don't be so rude dynamo.
Indeed, we could never know of his real intentions.

Anyway, Ayelet, I suppose you hardly could get any response here. PS is obviously a result of a very tense work and... not to share.

Anyway, I personally wish you luck with this.
</blockquote>

I believe "Ayelet" is actually a feminine name (Isreali)...in any event, Alexei, I'm sure "he" or "she" appreciates your endorsement and good faith. :) </blockquote>

Thanks,
Indeed, I suppose that such research, if well made, could be very positive. Such monography could be very much of pcychology, but not of "how to get to dream school, using other's ideas"
But the approach is still incorrect...


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